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May 23rd, 2012, 1:15 am

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crazylupus, May 20th, 2012, 2:03 pm     Reply


When I drew this page and the next one I wanted sushi so baaaaaaaaaaaaad XD

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crazylupus, May 23rd, 2012, 4:28 am     Reply

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@Flower24: Oh Thank you! That's so nice! .3.
" You have taken a much-used BL trope and are using it in a fresh way." Thank you ^^ Maybe it is because I did'nt wanted to draw in a manga style XD

"I'm glad you did not have them fall into bed, then a freak out and then the pursueing. I'm happy you choose to do it the "right-way round"."
^^ I love it when story are fast but for an hetero being gay and have sex with a guy in 30 pages is so impossible! That's why I prefer develope their sentiments slowly but in a realistic way ^^

"Despite Gael being a bit creepy, but it is in a kind of romantic way :)." Ha ha he seems like a stlaker yes but we'll discover the reason in Chaper two ^^

"I was wondering though, why did you choose the cat for Gael and the dog for Paul in the bonus thingies? I find Gael a lot more dog like with his open frienlyness and puppy dog eyes and Paul a lot more cat like with his stand-offishness. But maybe I'm missing something or all will be revealed later :)"
Yeah you are perfectly right but It is so much cute on Gaël. Maybe he must be more a wolf than a simple dog XD

"So definitely looking forward to the next page. "
My pleasure ^^

@Michii: BL? Où ça BL? tadadadaaaaa *sifflote* XD
Oui Paul sous-estime la sournoiserie et l'obstination de Gaël je crois -__-,

@Flower24: OMG I love you XD I am so happy to meet a person who seems to think like me and understand so much about my comic. Dear god *o*

"I'm not a big fan of comics that have too much UST - so for 300 pages there is all that UST and then they resolve it in the last 10 - but too fast is just as bad." Yeah. I have think about that part for my story. It will be the main line of the Chapter number 4: How Paul can have Sex with a man? XD

"So far I like your pace. It has a good balance and is realistic enough."
^^ I am so happy *bounce bounce* Because I don't have a proper style. :S Wheareas I love manga, I see manga everywhere so I didn't wanted to do like everyone.(it is since age now ^^) But It is difficult too ^^ (I had never really draw men befor this story. I am a little crazy XD)

""please-kiss-me" stage." I think it's impoooooossible for Paul too be at this stage XD Even Gaël never hopes to see paul like That I think.
Yuke are so girly and naives in some manga than that make me angry. -__-, I love when Uke have a personality.
Same for seme, Gaël had some pb (spoiler XD). I like it when Seme have weakness point like other human ^^
And I like it too in a realistic way: Uke can be seme and Seme can be Yuke.

@Flower24: "So true and I think you are doing a brilliant job there. "
Hug .3.
I'll do my best (well I finish this first chapeter to begin (I had never finish a story before. I stoped after 2 pages XD)
@Anaïs: C'est le manteau! le manteau! XD

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Flower24, May 23rd, 2012, 4:18 am     Reply


Just discovered this comic and so far I'm loving it. You have taken a much-used BL trope and are using it in a fresh way. I'm glad you did not have them fall into bed, then a freak out and then the pursueing. I'm happy you choose to do it the "right-way round".

Oh and the beginning was so sad! How can a mother forget her son's birtday?!? But he met Gael, so there is the silver lining. Despite Gael being a bit creepy, but it is in a kind of romantic way :).

I was wondering though, why did you choose the cat for Gael and the dog for Paul in the bonus thingies? I find Gael a lot more dog like with his open frienlyness and puppy dog eyes and Paul a lot more cat like with his stand-offishness. But maybe I'm missing something or all will be revealed later :)

So definitely looking forward to the next page.

Michii, May 23rd, 2012, 4:25 am     Reply


Ohoh..... c'est ce qu'on verra xDD très cher, si vous n'alliez pas plus loin, il n'y aurait pas marqué bl xD

Oaooaooh des sushi @q@

Flower24, May 23rd, 2012, 4:46 am     Reply


@crazylupus:
Yeah, I also love fast paced comics, but I do agree about the unconvincing fast pace of some manga's and BL comics. I'm not a big fan of comics that have too much UST - so for 300 pages there is all that UST and then they resolve it in the last 10 - but too fast is just as bad.

So far I like your pace. It has a good balance and is realistic enough. And I have a good feel about it overall. Like the last picture on this page - the one where Paul is laughing - it shows that he is going into this with an open mind and it starting to relax a little, but at the same time it tells the reader we aren't at the "please-kiss-me" stage. So yes, I think you have found a great and realistic balance ad you defintely have me hooked.

<<Maybe it is because I did'nt wanted to draw in a manga style XD>> That helps, but it is more how you are telling the story, rather than your art style.

And yeah, I can see Gael as a wolf and yes, he does look cute with the pointy ears :)

Flower24, May 23rd, 2012, 9:24 am     Reply


@crazylupus:
<<Uke can be seme and Seme can be Yuke.>>
Yep, I did not immediately think Oh, Paul is going to be the Uke and Gael the Seme. I was actually wondering how you were going to do it and then hoped that maybe you would go the switching route. Although Gael is more "attacking", but then he is gay and Paul is just discovering that side of his sexuality. I see them a quite equal characters.

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So true and I think you are doing a brilliant job there.

Anaïs (Guest), July 23rd, 2012, 2:20 pm     Reply


Paul a l'air si gay ^^"

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